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  • Jek, if you look on the shadow on the 'K' for the last one


    Youv'e pretty much fucked it, the top shadow part shouldn't be there. It should be on the other side

    But other than that, dope stuff. Keep it up and improvement will follow

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    • Blendone

      New plz rate

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      • the letters r tyte but i think there 2 close 2gether 2 where u cant read out the letters right

        so i would just keep the letters but space out a little bit but other than that tyte

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        • And the 3D's fucked


          Try and make the sections al flow in one direction not allover the place.

          But apart from that it's good, keep on working at it

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          • any crits on my two?

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            • Originally posted by gbeezy View Post
              two more simples... i think im ready to move on to curvier letters.

              tried extensions on these and never going to do it again lol..
              http://i29.tinypic.com/293kmu1.jpg

              simple, fixed the k but was too lazy to re take a pic
              http://i29.tinypic.com/syqt61.jpg

              crits.
              not trying to be a bitch but how come these cats get crit and i never get any? and i mean never.. only ppl that ever gave me crit is mynd and mash.oh and hyper.

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              • yea well i havnt got any on my two yet

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                • lol thats not fair i said the rugrats wuz tha shit

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                  • Originally posted by micro281 View Post
                    lol thats not fair i said the rugrats wuz tha shit
                    lol ya but i meant letter wise and such

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                    • oooooo well yea i like the fact that ur still tryin 2 get good at simples b4 u try and get wild and all and it looks tyte both of them so yea

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                      • any crits on my two micro or g beezy?

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                          tryin somit new , crits please

                          * edit * had another go
                          Last edited by Whitey124'92; 06-04-2008, 12:54 PM.

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                          • not really liking it
                            the a looks bad with the bar going into the a like that
                            it would make a cool p if u shortened the straight bar and flipped the letter

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                            • NEK, im not busting out the breakdown cause thy aren't that bad so ill just tell you. You say they are simples but the extensions on the N and K are really whack. The second simple is a lot beter than the first. In fact i really do like it.

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                              • listen 2 the allmighty DIGGS

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